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I love the pose that you have chosen for this particular piece. I also love the fact that it looks like a painting rather than a precis...

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Anna Ray Greyson
I'm going to miss the idea of having you.
But, I know deep down that I'm not strong enough to.
Your name your face I can't really place,
A punishment made for the games that I played.
I don't want you to go through that kind of pain.
I don't want you to question why you were brought here again.
The world is cruel and it won't get better.
Hello and goodbye...I will love you forever.
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Literature
Wolves, Sheep Sheep Herder
Keep an open mind they say.
To the bullshit game that they fucking play.
You ask me to come with the hope I stay,
Looking confused when I arrived that day.
Not worth the investment because of past transgressions. What, are you trying to teach me a lesson?
What the fuck are you trying to prove, when you tell me these things that you think are true.
What the hell are you doing to do when you come to find out who you're talking to.
Are you going to runaway too?
Back to your clique and the shit they spew. A trigger happy ex-con may be what you see.
Simply because you're afraid to be free.
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Literature
Nemo
I see you now, you're lost at sea,
In sadness you are slowly drowning.
Lost inside your lonely mind,
you keep telling yourself not to try.
Frees not free when you're living a lie.
Freedom is found in the world outside.
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Literature
Monday thru Wednesday
I.
I fill my cup with Sarcosine,
and mix it with the Cytosine.
I take the taste of you away,
with a side of Amitriptyline.
I walk outside my door,
and head over to the store.
Cigarettes and some regrets,
take me to the shore.
Cup of coffee in my hand,
I watch the world I cannot stand.
II.  
I walk my way across the shore,
to wash away my thoughts once more.
Xanex bars to hide the fact,
I wasn’t made to smile like that.
Svedka calls my name,
as I fill my glass again.
I roll a blunt to help me sleep,
I never wanted to be awake.
As I waste another day,
in a very special way.
I like to think this life was good,
God, take me someplace safe.
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Literature
Fold
What do you want me to say,
As I watch your memory fade.
With a fifth to split between each pack -my mind in a faraway place.
My eyes they, reflect like glass, as I sit here with my past.
I haven't time for conscious thought,
So don't bother to even ask.
What I think or where I am,
why I won't or think I can't.
It doesn't matter where I am,
So, please, just leave me as I am.
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Literature
2017.04.07
"Don't let your fear control you." You whisper behind closed doors.
An expectation that you, yourself wouldn't dare fight for.
How can you expect something, that you yourself would not give?
How can you tell a total stranger to live a life that you would never live?
Is it because you think I'm strong, because darling those observers never did.
Don't you see your own potential to live the life I'm burdened with?
Why would tell me to destroy myself, for those that left me dead?
Why would you leave me alone at night with those words scorched in my head.
Can't you see that I'm doing my best to live a life you have never lived?
Why do people always expect things from people that they themselves would never give?
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Literature
Enough
Don't tell me to keep trying.
Don't tell me that it will look up.
I'm tired of being lied to.
Just let me give up.
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Literature
This isn't Easy
People always want what they cannot have. And yet, they wonder why the world's so sad.
You can't find peace in the price you paid. You look for a solution in the scars you raised.
It's not going to be today, and it won't be tomorrow. But, please find gratitude in the path you follow.
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Literature
Exhumation
I.
There was something that corrosive.
That intolerant.
That ignorant.
That chaotic.
That drew me to your aftermath.
Something.
Somewhere.
Told me not to.
But oh, how I was drawn to you.
II.
I couldn't escape. I didn't want to.
That time.
That moment.
That place.
When you too, saw something worth holding onto.
III.
I was consumed.
Exhumed.
Forced to resume.
Daily life.
A simple shell.
Forged in hell.
To give you something worth loving -
even if it was yourself.
IV.
I will never stop living - even if it's spent waiting.
For a moment.
Words spoken.
Or silence.
The memory is what I crave.
One day.
I will forget.
But I'm not ready.
No, not yet.
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Literature
Rocky Mountain Fever
There is a sweet addiction,
to the sound of precision.
A weapon is the heart -
shot right through.
With words I will not utter,
His silence begging me to.
Listen to the hammer hit -
A cocked and loaded gun.
Dead is the man,
Whose heart I could not love.
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Literature
2017/02/14
When you're born inside a lie,
How does one find time to try.
To live a life not meant for them,
Without trying to take their life?
When the nights have left you cold,
And you don't trust a single soul.
Why would you waste the time to play, when you would really rather fold.
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Literature
Worthy
I want you in my arms,
So that I can trace the scars,
That are adorned all over your body.
I want to take the time,
To memorize each line.
Simply to remind you that you are fine.
A battle worn body,
With a glorious heart,
That no mortal dare disregard.
Smile for me, and as I sit listening,
To each heart wrenching story.
(You are worthy...)
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Literature
Keep Breathing
I.
Turn it around and flip it upside down.
Cover my ears so I can't hear the sound.
Close my eyes, and make me blind.
Let me listen to the tears you cry.
Call me weak so that you can be strong.
Listen to the meaning behind this song.
II.
Turn it around and flip it upside down.
I tried so hard to choke it down.
Close my eyes and make me blind,
Save me from such a horrific sight.
Call me strong because you think you're weak, make me a slave to your suffering.
III.
Turn it around and flip it upside down.
Look at the world, how it has come unbound.
A sacrifice without meaning except to those screaming. A life isn't a life when your heart stopped beating.
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Literature
Hate Me
I swallowed the flames they gave to me,
I sold my soul to set you free.
I destroyed myself to save the things I hate. That look of disgust I bled to create.  
Now your safe - a haven away.
From the darkness I bore,
To help you escape.
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Literature
The Good Dye Young
Laid to rest are the dreams I keep, dead are the words that kept me breathing.
Barely a whisper, muttered above a chaotic scene, you lean close and whisper horrific things.
Barely audible, I murmur a reply, "I will never forget the pain you have chosen to hide."
The look on your face, I refuse to erase. Simply for the realization that you weren't lost in the haze.
I coughed up what was left - branded with false love. I choked on the heart you left in the mud.
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Literature
Blasphemy
There's a time and a place,
For the demons I face.
Somewhere between twilight,
and the memories I've saved.
A blade is a blade, that whispers savory things.  X marks the spot for the secrets I keep.
Exposed to the air I hear them scream. I scream at the ground where the red lay dying.
"Nobody cares."
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I'm going to miss the idea of having you.
But, I know deep down that I'm not strong enough to.

Your name your face I can't really place,
A punishment made for the games that I played.

I don't want you to go through that kind of pain.

I don't want you to question why you were brought here again.

The world is cruel and it won't get better.
Hello and goodbye...I will love you forever.
Anna Ray Greyson
I'm lost again. I'm at a crossroad. Right to choice is a bitter, and honest reality.

What we want isn't always what we can have. The mind and the heart are at war once more....
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Keep an open mind they say.
To the bullshit game that they fucking play.

You ask me to come with the hope I stay,
Looking confused when I arrived that day.

Not worth the investment because of past transgressions. What, are you trying to teach me a lesson?

What the fuck are you trying to prove, when you tell me these things that you think are true.

What the hell are you doing to do when you come to find out who you're talking to.

Are you going to runaway too?

Back to your clique and the shit they spew. A trigger happy ex-con may be what you see.

Simply because you're afraid to be free.
Wolves, Sheep Sheep Herder
W.I.P For those who are the first to speak and the last to listen.
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I see you now, you're lost at sea,
In sadness you are slowly drowning.

Lost inside your lonely mind,
you keep telling yourself not to try.

Frees not free when you're living a lie.
Freedom is found in the world outside.
Nemo
Song Bird >
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I.

I fill my cup with Sarcosine,
and mix it with the Cytosine.

I take the taste of you away,
with a side of Amitriptyline.

I walk outside my door,
and head over to the store.

Cigarettes and some regrets,
take me to the shore.

Cup of coffee in my hand,
I watch the world I cannot stand.

II.  

I walk my way across the shore,
to wash away my thoughts once more.

Xanex bars to hide the fact,
I wasn’t made to smile like that.

Svedka calls my name,
as I fill my glass again.

I roll a blunt to help me sleep,
I never wanted to be awake.

As I waste another day,
in a very special way.

I like to think this life was good,
God, take me someplace safe.
Monday thru Wednesday
Another W.I.P. Welcome to my weekend basically. Judge if you want to. idgaf. 

Happy reading. 
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What do you want me to say,
As I watch your memory fade.

With a fifth to split between each pack -my mind in a faraway place.

My eyes they, reflect like glass, as I sit here with my past.

I haven't time for conscious thought,
So don't bother to even ask.

What I think or where I am,
why I won't or think I can't.

It doesn't matter where I am,
So, please, just leave me as I am.

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